Good effort here. Enjoyed the photos and your interview.

Of course, this wasn’t supposed to be a profile on one person but I can appreciate the effort. Also, the photos ended before the audio.

Good try. Best of luck next year.

4/6

Roz

Good points here. Enjoyed reading your thoughts.

Remember that your blog is a place to get passionate about issues. Use your opinion and have fun with it! Also – photos and hyperlinks add to the visual appeal so add those wherever possible.

Looking forward to your final project!

6/7

Roz

Good work. Your blog is coming along nicely!

A few comments:

-Links must be clickable. Meaning if a reader clicks on the link they are taken immediately to the site being referenced. If you’re having difficulty with this (creating hyperlinks) check the WordPress FAQ. I’ll be discussing it in class tomorrow as well.

-I’m enjoying your thoughts on what makes a person successful. Remember to try and keep your style conversational. Envision yourself saying your blog post out loud to a good friend over coffee.

-Also, one thing that makes a blog really great is to use the links to tell a story. Rather than providing two links at the bottom that aren’t referenced in the preceding post, build those links into the post. Make them a part of the story.

Well done! Looking forward to the next one!

7/10

Roz

Cheers,

Roz